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This is the other major change to the story, other than the end of Part Nine which was stalled for, like, forever. Giles' feelings here are part of what sparked my current fic, set 2 years post "Chosen."

Previous Parts here:

Summer 1 - Where Do We Go from Here?
Summer 2 - Preparations and Farewells
Summer 3- Muddling Through
Summer 4 - The Business of Living
Summer 5 - Growing Up
Summer 6 - Making Sense

Summer 7/9 - Poetic License )

Summer 8 - Gods and Ghosts
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Chapter Title has changed, if not for the better, at least also not for the worse. Previous parts are Here:


Summer 1 - Where Do We Go from Here?
Summer 2 - Preparations and Farewells
Summer 3 - Muddling Through

And no, Yahoo does not get another chance. Links only from here on.

Summer 4/9 - The Business of Living )

Summer 5 - Growing Up
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Here's a new version of part 3, also getting ready to go up on ODD/ GRB and Tweedybookguy. I'm going to give Yahoo one more shot, and if it doesn't format readably, I'll post links to here only for the other parts.

Previous parts here:

Summer 1 - Where Do We Go from Here?
Summer 2 - Preparations and Farewells

Summer 3/9 - Muddling Through )

Summer 4 - The Business of Living
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I'm making final edits to this story and posting it both here and on a couple of yahoo groups. This version is significantly altered from the original, thanks in large part to the challenge by [livejournal.com profile] antennapedia for me to show a scene I initially skipped over, and by several people a couple of years ago who found everyone just a little too reasonable for the situation. Hope I've rectified it for you. This also differs from the version currently on ODD. Sorry, Dusty, and thanks again. Previous part here:

Summer 1 - Where Do We Go from Here?


Summer 2/9 - Preparations and Farewells )

Summer 3- Muddling Through
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Ok, to make up for the nano post, and to make it even Less likely anyone will read it, here's something a good deal better. This represents as far as the story got in any forum-- I think even less made it out onto ODD. I was trying to get myself into Willow mindset, and I remembered she figured prominently in this section.

So, as always, comments and criticisms welcomed. After nano is over, I'll put this out on the yahoo groups I inhabit, but I'd like to smooth any of the remaining rough edges before then.

This was originally posted on May 31, 2005, about 2 years after the first part. And you wonder that I've never finished anything? Except, thanks to your encouragement, Friends, I will be finishing This. Thanks, everybody.

Previous Parts Here.

Gods and Ghosts )
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Well, not a bad writing day. I got out 398 words at lunch of this-- a re-re-write of a scene I punted on a long while back. That'll be what I claim as an official count for the day, even though I probably doubled it adding and editing the rest of this to fit that piece in. I'd really like some feedback from anyone who has the time or inclination. It's much improved over the original, which can unfortunately be found a couple of places out there, under my own name. But it's also still a little uneven, with the darker tone of the new material .

I was kind of shocked, that almost 400 words was only about 4 paragraphs. Not really that much, for me.


And now-- the next part of Summer.
Previous parts can be found here.

Poetic License )
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