Great fic. I like that you were able to keep those things that did work but just needed to be fleshed out or ordered differently. The feeling that these two dads have embraced their fatherhood and thier differences shines through.

I already have had a taste of the larger story that this belongs to and can't wait to read the rest of it.

As for posting. You can create a new journal just for fic or if you don't plan on adding explicit sexual content you can easily place the story on fanfiction dot net. I still use it to house my fics. Most of the other sites I know are either adult oriented or specifically for the SS/HG pairing.