Thanks. There's still two chapters left, though. I really am aiming for something like this. This actually much longer than any of the previous chapters, and the next two are on the same kind of pace. I still hope to round it out satisfactorily. There's a more to resolve here, not just for Snape and Harry but for David as well.

Still, if you still feel this way after 13 and 14, let me know. No writing is ever finished, just abandoned. I probably could stand to improve the end.

Thanks for your comment.