On fic writing, I think for some people having a draft complete is helpful. My partner in crime and I have problems even if we have a draft because we have all sorts of epiphanies as we are polishing and fanged plot bunnies of doom attack from the ether conspiring to change the story so radically that the draft is useless. That, however, is our writing style. That is the drawback of having two abstract thinkers working together. In any case, I love your story as it is. I haven't noticed it wandering too terribly badly (if at all IMHO). It is sometimes in those wanderings that you get some of the best character development and sometimes some of the best dialogue.
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On fic writing, I think for some people having a draft complete is helpful. My partner in crime and I have problems even if we have a draft because we have all sorts of epiphanies as we are polishing and fanged plot bunnies of doom attack from the ether conspiring to change the story so radically that the draft is useless. That, however, is our writing style. That is the drawback of having two abstract thinkers working together. In any case, I love your story as it is. I haven't noticed it wandering too terribly badly (if at all IMHO). It is sometimes in those wanderings that you get some of the best character development and sometimes some of the best dialogue.