I liked most of it. I loved Willow leaving Buffy and Giles alone to work things out. The talk with Lillian and Buffy felt a little off. Maybe Lillian would be angry with Buffy? A you took Giles away from me and now you're back to take Ellen, thing. Or not.
One thing that sometimes works for me is to just write the bad scene and then press on and write the rest of the story and then come back to it. Somehow having the rest of the story done makes writing the bad scene easier.
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Date: 2006-12-06 04:25 am (UTC)One thing that sometimes works for me is to just write the bad scene and then press on and write the rest of the story and then come back to it. Somehow having the rest of the story done makes writing the bad scene easier.
This is good though. Looking forward to more.