Summer 9/9 - Night Visitors

Ok, I sang way more than 200 notes this morning, some of them even correctly, and then came home to the joy of LJ network problems. So I worked on polishing this last section. I would REALLY like feeback on it,particularly in the second half, as there's some stuff I'm not satisfied with, especially a long speech I immediately identify as "unlike" the character. You'll recognize it when you get there, trust me. And I'll forgo the word count for today, unless I get very inspired later on tonight.

Previous Parts Here.

( Night Visitors )

Mini Nano Saturday word count - 419

Since LJ was out all day, and I was for most of it, too, I wrote out a character sketch of Giles, similar to the ones I've seen Antenna do. I was surprised at how helpful I found it-- more so, I think, than if I had just gone with the first couple of sentences and tried to work it into a narrative. I need to go deeper, but this is a start.

And hey, does anyone know if the Buffy comic is out yet? And if so, if it's suitable for children? My little imp was recently turned on to graphic novels by one of his school buddies, and hey-- he's reading. I just need to know if this is something I need to read in the store, or actually buy and bring home.

Oh hey-- I'm going to get Jossed, aren't I? I was always sorry I missed out on that delight of contemporary fandom... Cool.

3008 / 50000
(6.0%)

And now-- feel free to ignore this....
( My Giles (2 Years Post Chosen) )