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Date: 2007-10-19 08:03 pm (UTC)
Oh, heavens! What on earth did Harry do with Snape's memories???!!! *bites nails*

Ghost!Snape really moves me: he's so lost, so lonely, so yearning for connection. And yet so very Snape, still quite in control and sardonic. What will be the effect on him when those memories are recovered? Waaaaaah! I just want to cuddle him!

Your portrayal of adult Auror Harry is also so good, and I love his relationship with Davey.

Well, it's all good. I am loving this story, and look forward eagerly to Part 12. :) Thanks for the opportunity to comment!

Another small Brit-speak comment, I hope I'm not getting on your nerves with this. I'm not sure why you have Snape call Hermione Madame Weasley. I like it, but 'Madame' is a French courtesy title. 'Mrs Weasley' would be fine. :)
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