You've done so much in this chapter; I think you could have made it longer and more complete. It seems a little sketchy, as it is, to me. It's a great plot, a great idea for making Harry a real actor in bringing justice to Snape; I think you could have taken more time with it.
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Date: 2007-10-21 03:00 am (UTC)