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Well, part 5 of my EIP (Epic in Progress) is now up on ff net: here.

I'm pleased with how it's going, even as I despair of getting any further or fixing the glaring deficiencies every time I sit down to it. I owe a huge debt to my betas, not only on this work ([livejournal.com profile] research_girl and [livejournal.com profile] sahiya) but also on other work, past and present. You all know who you are. I'm too afraid of missing any to list you all out. It's weird though-- I really have written a lot over the past year and a half.

[livejournal.com profile] slaymesoftly posed an interesting question about betas recently on [livejournal.com profile] riters_r_us. How do you deal as a beta with a writer who really is Bad? I'm not that bad, but I am painfully aware my imperfections must also be painful (or painfully funny maybe at times) to read. But I noticed going through the beta notes on this part, that after I cleared away the things they noted, it somehow gave me insight into things they hadn't complained about. I added some things, tweaked some others, and I can just feel that it's better than it would have been. It's almost like clearing away the dead wood let the rest flourish.

And it also let me pull my focus away from some things I thought were bad that they didn't mention, to see other things. To trust that they were okay enough to move on and see something I hadn't before. Not sure I can explain it any better, but I am quite grateful for how it worked out.

Happy Holy Saturday to all.

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Date: 2008-03-23 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samson28.livejournal.com
Such a cute kitty Giles! I shall try not sneeze on him as I'm allergic. :)

I do think Snape and other characters such as Spike and Ethan can be hard to write incharacter, but taking away their snark and attitude they lose something.


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Date: 2008-03-24 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bemoan1000.livejournal.com
I also think taking away their snark they lose a lot. For me they become different characters. I stop reading a story if this happens, but I know that there is an audience for these characters to become “nice.”

I still have yet to read any BVS. I’m starting on season 3 now.


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