Best bit from nano

Dec. 1st, 2007 10:54 am
hobgoblinn: (nano onegood)
A couple of writing communities I participated in over this month asked us to submit our best writing for the month. Here's my now edited version of the flashback scene I shared earlier in the month. I have about half the story written now, and I have some ideas about how it needs to end. It's too long to post as a comment, I think, so it's here behind the cut for anyone who wants to see what I'm most proud of from my work last month.

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okay, you asked for it

Nov. 13th, 2007 05:27 pm
hobgoblinn: (nano onegood)
A short fragment from an earlier night, then last night's take on the same material. Unedited, unbeta'd, read at your own risk, etc. Thanks again to [livejournal.com profile] sunsethill, who asked for it, and others who commented. I think I have a direction for this now.

This is Christmas day at the Potter's, Snape is a ghost, and the story when it's done is meant as a continuation to Lost Boys. Think that's about all you need to know. One thing I'd really like feedback on is how jarring the present/ past shifts are. I'm trying to capture echoes of one in the other, but I'm not sure how well I'm succeeding. May be a bit too echoey.

Also, what would Minerva transfigure Snape's wand into?

All right, back to it.

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