Yeah for the update. I'm really enjoying the story so shall go read in a few.
I have only beta read a few times as my punctuation is pretty hit and miss! I was to check out the spellings and characterisation.
Well I slunk away quietly after reading a few chapters. The author was ever so nice and very often took a few of my suggestions but the characterisation of Snape was just so awful - he was like a fluffy, insipid kitten. I cringed everytime he said anything and just knew I wouldn't be able to read anymore.
Thing is, I can read and enjoy well written badfic but this was bad!
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Date: 2008-03-22 06:53 pm (UTC)I have only beta read a few times as my punctuation is pretty hit and miss! I was to check out the spellings and characterisation.
Well I slunk away quietly after reading a few chapters. The author was ever so nice and very often took a few of my suggestions but the characterisation of Snape was just so awful - he was like a fluffy, insipid kitten. I cringed everytime he said anything and just knew I wouldn't be able to read anymore.
Thing is, I can read and enjoy well written badfic but this was bad!