Fic: Two Dads (Harry Potter)
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Title: Two Dads
Author: hobgoblin
Contact: hobgoblinn_sp@yahoo.com, http://hobgoblinn.livejournal.com/
Rating: FRC
Distribution: Sure. Let me know where it’s going.
Feedback: Makes me write better. Or guilty for not writing more. Use your power well.
Spoilers/ Notes: Post Deathly Hallows. Takes place about 4 years before the epilogue. See notes at end.
This can be read as a stand-alone, but it's also backstory to this: Lost Boys.
Summary: A letter leads Harry to discover common ground where he’d least expected it.
Acknowledgments: Thanks to
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DISCLAIMER: The characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, Scholastic Books, and whoever else may have a hold on them. I own nothing in the Potterverse, or anywhere else, for that matter. Strictly for entertainment, and no profit is being made. Please sue somebody else.
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Fatherhood changes people, Harry supposed. It had certainly changed him. He still couldn’t believe how exhausting it was, trying to stay one step ahead of his kids’ crazy ideas. At least he and Ginny had older relatives and friends in the wizarding world to tell them what to expect, what was normal. It was nothing like it had been for him, growing up, blamed for every odd thing he accidentally made happen, and quite a few he didn’t.
He read through the letter in his hand again. Dudley Dursley. Wanted to meet with him. About his son David, a boy almost Albus’ age. A boy who, if Dudley was right, had inherited more than green eyes from the Evans branch of the family.
It was hard to forget sixteen years of bullying and abuse at the hands of his cousin. But Harry remembered something had changed in Dudley by that last summer. He’d really never been quite the same after the dementor attack. And he had wished him luck at their last parting. Said he didn’t think Harry was a waste of space. Hardly a ringing endorsement, but coming from Dudley, in front of strangers and his disapproving parents, it had been a huge step.
Well, it couldn’t hurt to go see the kid, he thought. Maybe Dudley was mistaken. He glanced down at the letter and reread the end. “Look, I just don’t want my son to go through what you did. What we both did. Do you know, for the longest time I thought it was a disease, the way you were. That if I wasn’t real careful, I would catch it. And then Mum and Dad would start to hate me, too. It doesn’t make it right, how bad I treated you. But David is a good kid. Way better than me. And I can’t help him with this and keep him safe if I don’t know stuff. Please come.”
So Harry apparated to Little Whinging early one Saturday morning in September, to a deserted alley he remembered quite well, and walked over to the football field, where a group of 7 year olds was playing a match. It was a glorious day, the sky a brilliant blue, the air crisp and cool. As he approached the sideline, he easily picked out Dudley standing a little apart from the other parents, pacing nervously and pausing every so often to look around him. He was still overweight, but not as massively so, with blonde hair going the same dirty grey as his father’s, years ahead of its time.
Dudley caught sight of him then and gave a tentative wave as Harry silently joined him, scanning the field. David was a goalkeeper, Dudley had said, and sure enough, there was a skinny, wiry kid who looked more like Harry than Dudley at that age, save for the reddish blonde hair. Dudley followed Harry’s eyes, then confirmed, “That’s David. And um, thanks for coming.”
Harry nodded, but still said nothing. He watched the action on the field intently, knowing Dudley was anxiously watching him. The boy was quite talented-- great reflexes, much better than than one would expect from a child of his age. Harry watched as the ball sailed towards the goal, just outside the boy’s reach-- no way he’d get it in time....
He caught it, diving. “Luckiest kid I ever saw,” growled a woman a little way from them, under her breath. Dudley looked a tad sheepish, as if he’d heard such remarks before. Harry continued to watch.
After a few more saves, Harry couldn’t put it off any longer. “Great reflexes on that kid,” he said casually. He looked his cousin in the eye. “Let’s take a walk. Shall we get some coffee? He’ll be playing a while longer, right?”
Dudley nodded, and Harry felt sorry for him. He looked slightly ill, but other than that, his expression was nothing like Harry had expected. He wasn't happy, but he wasn't completely revolted, either. They began walking across the grassy area towards the street, where, if Harry remembered rightly, there used to be a coffee shop.
“Well, you’ve already guessed it’s not just luck,” Harry said finally, when they were far enough away from anyone who might overhear. “I saw the ball change directions quite a few times there-- just slightly, but more than natural causes could explain. I’d guess he’s wanting to catch the ball so much that his, er, magic is affecting it in his favor when things are close....”
“Just like yours grew your hair back all those times Mum cut it off,” Dudley finished quietly. A slight grin played along his lips. “And there was that time a pane of glass disappeared at the zoo....” Harry hesitated, then grinned back.
“That was totally an accident,” he said.
“And I was a prat,” Dudley admitted. His grin faded. “I had a huge row with Mum, when I asked her how to get hold of you.”
Harry grimaced. “I’ll bet.”
“But I told her if she ever wanted to see either of her grandkids anymore, she’d better tell me what I needed to know.”
They reached the coffee shop and Harry tugged open the door. The companionable silence while they waited allowed Harry to gather his thoughts, and to study his cousin. He had changed. Dudley was no longer the thoughtlessly cruel git he’d grown up with. He’d still bully his mum a bit to get his way, obviously. But he said thanks to the girl at the counter and tipped her. He opened the door for an old man and held it patiently while he shuffled inside. And while thinking would never be Dudley’s strong suit, he was all the while deep in thought, pondering what this new knowledge would mean, not just for his son, but for his whole family. He looked... like a dad.
Stepping back out of the shop, Harry blew on his coffee and took a careful sip, wondering what he should say. “Well, on the upside,” he said finally, lightly, as they started back to the park, “...he’s got the makings of a great Quidditch Keeper.”
“That’s what, that game your sort plays?” Dudley said it matter of factly, without the sneer he’d had as a kid. Harry watched as his cousin mulled that over for a moment and then brightened a little. “He won’t have to go to Smeltings, either. That’s almost worth it right there.”
Harry had to agree with that. He cast about for something else to say, something neutral and polite. “So, you’ve got a daughter too, right? How old is she?”
A new concern flickered through his cousin’s eyes. “Almost 3. How early do they... I mean....”
Oh. Yeah, good going. Really neutral subject, that. But Harry replied, “It varies. And I think in families where this is, er, common, they're looking for it and spot it sooner. Anyway, you know from our mums that it doesn’t always show up in all the kids in a family....” He stopped, noticing how oddly Dudley was looking at him. “What?”
Dudley shook his head. “I just thought you’d be, I dunno, happier about all this, or something.”
Harry watched the kids running up and down the field and thought for a minute. He knew how disconnected some of his Muggle-born friends were from this world now, how Hermione’s parents loved her, but would never really understand their daughter. It had never really struck him, having so little to look back on fondly himself, how sad that was. Until now.
But he couldn’t think of any way to say it to Dudley. Instead, he mustered a grin and said, “How would you like to bring the family over for dinner on Sunday?”
Dudley gave him a long measuring look, then nodded solemnly. “I think we’d like that.”
The match ended then, and the little goalkeeper ran up to them. “Did you see, Dad? Did you?”
Dudley’s face changed as he looked down at his son-- pride, and love-- and acceptance, Harry thought.
“Yeah, I saw,” he answered, smiling. But there was a deep sadness in his eyes, too, just for a second. Then he said, “David, I’d like you to meet someone. This is my cousin Harry. Harry Potter.”
Lost Boys - Part 1 - Visions of the Afterlife
Notes:
This is a companion piece/prologue to a post-DH story I started about Albus Severus, before I decided I couldn’t stand the name, and that the relationship was just too pat to work. So, instead, this boy will meet a certain ghost in the dungeons of Hogwarts, and this story is my attempt to work out how he knows about his family and the wizarding world, and the history of the ghost. It started with the image of two dads watching a football match, with more going on for them then was apparent at first.
And, this is my first Harry Potter fic, though not my first brush with writing fanfic. Feedback is truly appreciated, up to and including flames. I can take it. Really.
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Date: 2007-09-22 03:38 pm (UTC)Good one.
Sadly, not in HP fandom, so I couldn't begin to tell you where to put this.
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Date: 2007-09-22 04:12 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-22 04:03 pm (UTC)I know you hate Albus's name, but I think the Severus part was only shown to us for effect. It's his middle name and it didn't look like that's what people called him, ya know? Didn't Ginny just call him Al?
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Date: 2007-09-22 04:11 pm (UTC)I don't have any scenes coming to me on that dinner or David's other time integrating into the magical world. Maybe there'll be a flashback or something when I get the later stuff worked out. Dudley's experience in hiding would be interesting, though.
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Date: 2007-09-22 04:14 pm (UTC)Anyway, guess I'll pray for an epiphany for you about dinner? Still, really liked this story. Makes me want to read more!
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Date: 2007-09-22 05:28 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-23 12:56 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-22 10:11 pm (UTC)This is great!
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Date: 2007-09-23 12:57 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-23 12:36 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-23 01:00 am (UTC)And there may be flashbacks that pick up some of this.
Thanks for the feedback.
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Date: 2007-10-07 02:00 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-23 01:20 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-23 01:50 am (UTC)Wow.
Date: 2007-09-23 02:24 am (UTC)Re: Wow.
Date: 2007-09-23 02:29 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-23 07:48 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-23 01:06 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-24 01:52 am (UTC)I already have had a taste of the larger story that this belongs to and can't wait to read the rest of it.
As for posting. You can create a new journal just for fic or if you don't plan on adding explicit sexual content you can easily place the story on fanfiction dot net. I still use it to house my fics. Most of the other sites I know are either adult oriented or specifically for the SS/HG pairing.
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Date: 2007-09-24 02:23 am (UTC)No seriously, I'll take a look of fanfic dot net. Though I seem to recall someone on my flist warning they were a "pit of voles". Maybe she ran afoul of the content issue. Not a problem here. Ever. Trust me.
Thanks again for all your help on this.
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Date: 2007-09-24 06:06 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-24 11:47 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-24 04:52 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-24 05:30 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-09-29 04:36 am (UTC)For Genfic, there's lumos.sycophanthex.com . If you're going toward a slash style of relationship, then there's eros.sycophanthex.com .
thepetulantpoetess.com is geared toward SS/HG but there are other stories on there too.
If it's genfic that's not rated beyond probably R, then fanfiction.mugglenet.com . If you do that, join the forums (fanfiction.mugglenet.com/forum) and let me know what house you get sorted into! ;D )
fictionalley.org is supposed to be good but I had nothing but problems with their archive and finally gave up.
hpfandom.net is a smaller one; no quality control but more aimed at HP fans than ff.net.
skyehawke.com may still be invite only, and is not a good place to post if you want reviews.
the-archive.net requires quality control at first but then everyone can post unvalidated. I've been reading a really good story there.
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Date: 2007-10-07 01:59 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-10-15 07:45 am (UTC)Now, I go to read the rest of it.
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Date: 2007-10-16 02:05 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-10-17 01:42 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-10-17 11:02 pm (UTC)I mostly got this backwards, having named a boy David, then wondered how he would have a connection to our ghost-- and I got this flash of an image-- and there was an outline. I'm pretty sure I couldn't maintain it to write more Dudders, but his son is a darling lad to write.
Thanks again for your comment.
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Date: 2007-11-05 05:28 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-11-05 02:44 pm (UTC)Hope you enjoy the rest of little Davey's adventures. The way his character came to life really surprised me. Especially since he was mostly born of a desperation to have a child I could name myself be in this story, someone who was not James, Albus Severus *shudder*, Hugo or Scorpius.
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Date: 2007-11-05 07:17 pm (UTC)As I mentioned, I was hoping someone would make a Dudley fic. I thought he had changed after the Dementor attack. Enough so, that if he ever had children he'd be willing to ask Harry for help because he didn't want his child to grow up the way Harry had. I'd envisioned it to be a daughter though. Because of the conflict of Aunt Petunia being a Muggle and Lily who wasn't. It would've made it interesting for Aunt Petunia having to deal with a granddaughter being something that she couldn't be and how she learned to deal with it. I think I actually mentioned my thoughts to someone about this at
Anyway I'm very happy with your story. I've already memmed it, and hope you don't take it down :)
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Date: 2007-11-05 08:37 pm (UTC)You may be pleased to hear that I'm doing an AU off the end of HBP which will feature a changed Dudley as a minor character, and some of what you've said about Petunia I may be able to work out with Hermione, another muggle-born witch. I'm doing the story for National Novel Writing Month, so it will take a bit before the craptastic first draft is ever readable. And a holiday fic featuring Severus and Petunia and the gang is not impossible. Thanks again for your comment.
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Date: 2007-11-05 08:52 pm (UTC)I'm going to be tracking your journal for whenever you write more fanfic. I can't wait to read what you come up with. The Severus and Petunia holiday fic sounds like a good one. It would probably be difficult for both of them considering their past connections. And I'm curious to see what you have in store for Dudley's daughter. Especially if she looks anything like Lily. I wonder how that would affect Severus the Ghostly Professor?
Thanks again :)
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Date: 2007-11-05 09:28 pm (UTC)Feel free to friend back or not, as you like. Most of my journal is unlocked at present. I'll be irritating posting word counts over the next month (and possibly some excerpts I get stuck on) but usually I'm not that prolific unless I have a story I'm posting.
Again, thanks, and nice meeting you, as it were.
Hob
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Date: 2007-11-05 09:45 pm (UTC)Glad to be of help. I'm not a writer, so I admire anyone who can convey good stories. I don't know much about how fanfic writing goes, so it'll be interesting to see how you do it.
Looking forward to reading your posts :) Whitestar
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